City to country transition

To make the switch between the city scene and the country scene smoother, I have filmed some ariel footage with my drone of Maltby, showing a housing estate with some greenery. The shot after this is of the car driving through an estate, so the clips match well. I have also used my drone to film some green fields, to use just before the establishing shot of Roche Abbey.

The quality of the camera on the drone isn't as high as the one I have used to film the rest of my footage, however I think that the dramatic shot, used relatively quickly, takes the viewers' attention away from the poorer quality. I do think the shot is effective and does make the transition smoother.

Day to night transition

I have altered the transition between day and night by adding in a time lapse of a sunset to represent the changing of time. This fades in over him drinking and fades out to the black before the night shots.

Draft 4

Draft 3

Here is my 3rd draft:

2nd draft

Titling trial 2.

I couldn't get the numberplate to work for the titling, so I changed it to look asif it was written on the floor in chalk.

Transition from day to night changes

From the feedback I got, I saw that the part where it changes from him drinking to the night scenes were unclear that that was representing him having a night out, so I changed the transitions and added an effect to add to this, I will also eventually change the sound to make it sound faded out asif he is drunk to add to the narrative and clear any misconceptions up.

Titling trial

I tried changing the titling so that the name of my production ( Memory Is Key) was written on the numberplate of the car, this didn't work very well...